The Official Writing Challenge
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04/28/22
Well done. I could almost hear the thud of the hammer.
A clear reminder of the price that was paid for out salvation.
This is very very good. I too could hear the hammer fall.
I hope it does well.
04/30/22
Very expressive, through the power of your rhythm, and the economy of language. Well done
Gripping ! You can't read this without hearing the thud of the hammer, knowing that He died willingly, making provisions for even those who pounded those nails to have eternal life with Him by confessing their sins and making Him Lord of their lives. What a Savior! Hallelujah!
05/01/22
Excellent writing! Heartfelt words! Touching truths!
Excellent writing here-way beyond beginnings' writing level. Your gifted writing touches the heart
I really like the repetition. You do a wonderful job of painting a picture with your words.
Congratulations on your first and EC. Well deserved. Great work. Looking forward to many more.