The Official Writing Challenge
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03/23/22
You have some good memories.
04/21/22
This story is a lovely tribute to your father. Because of the 750 word count, it is hard to express all one wishes to express. Try to trim out all unnecessary details to focus on the theme of the story. Get your reader to feel the dirt crunching under your feet, your taste buds dancing over your mother's great cooking, your father's booming voice, etc. Let the reader experience your joy through your words. Start with a strong hook and end with a solid conclusion. And, keep writing!