The Official Writing Challenge
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03/10/22
I've known people just like this and I enjoyed reading all that your mother did! I think your entry might be stronger if you consolidated some ideas, and went a bit deeper on how her life, and ultimately how Christ's life impacted you. There were a few misplaced periods, but I think it's probably due to the formatting that occurs when you submit--this happened to me before. Keep writing and keep learning! Thanks for sharing!
I enjoyed your entry very much. I can understand your mother’s focus on her great interest. I don’t have the same interest in saving/redeeming things but I think I have it in writing and I love the thought that the Great Redeemer was fully committed and devoted to Redeeming us.
Thank you.
03/12/22
I'm glad that your mother enjoyed and brought her happiness in what she did to save money and resources.

Keep writing many more inspiring stories.

Be blessed.
03/12/22
Your writing reminded me of ve a close friend who is a confirmed redeemer of a bargain. And her commitment to that has, more than once, been a blessing to me as she has been helped me to save on things I needed but didn't have the money to get. Just this past week I needed a new hand mixer and I got a call from her yesterday that she found one at the price I could afford and I got it.
This essay could certainly be expanded to include the way we could share Christ and His work as our Great Redeemer with those who may not know him.
Enjoyed this, keep writing.
Great work Jim. Congratulations on your place.