The Official Writing Challenge
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Clearly, based on the ref. In Ephesians, God would have Christians be kind to one another and you mentioned several other examples of kindness to support. But there are two sides to every coin and I would suggest you juxtapose His kindness with his absolute requirement for righteousness (through Jesus). Only hearing of God’s kindness makes Him sound a little mamby pamby in my view.
I thought the writing was good, could trim down a little tighter. No need to say things like “the last thing I’m going to say in this article”.
Honing your writing skills is a never ending quest and what you have to say and share with your readers is important, so keep on working at it and along the way you will touch the hearts of many.
I loved your Scriptural references urging His response within us to be our way of life. He’s a good, good God xx
11/15/21
Very solid material with a strong message that may need to be a little more inviting than its declaration style seems to show. This would draw your readers in, rather than push them along.
11/26/21
I agree with the last suggestion: use modern examples that all can relate to, to pull the reader into the story!