The Official Writing Challenge
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09/03/21
I love the story. Your writing is engaging and kept me wanting to know how this turned out!
09/03/21
Awwwww! How beautiful! Engaging, entertaining, inspiring. You've touched my heart.

Thank you. :-)

09/03/21
Loved your story. Held my attention. A delightful story.
I absolutely loved this story. Beautifully written too. Thank you. No red ink from me- just keep it up.
09/07/21
Clever title and an engaging story.

My one piece of red ink would be not to use the topic word so often in your entry, give the reader a little bit of a mystery and maybe use alternate words that allude to the topic.