The Official Writing Challenge
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02/07/06
I'll leave a comment even though I don't know why no one else has. This is great! I agree 100%, "But God" where would be without his mercy? You Go! Keep on writing and keep on believing!
02/09/06
Your 4th paragraph is absolutely beautiful. Consider ending it there--the following line are almost anticlimactic after such a lovely paragraph. "But God..." will stick with me all day.