The Official Writing Challenge
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08/28/21
L loved your story and how Kayla truly sparkled for Jesus. Also how God used you in her life as you surrendered to Him. Thank you.
08/28/21
Oh I loved your story, and the powerful wrap up.

Eyes do sparkle from within to without with the love and conviction of the LORD.

Well done,
Blessings~
This is an inspirational backstory. There are so many children in the world who need someone to step in on their behalf. Very few are as fortunate as Kayla. I'm not sure you needed as much of the back story that you gave, but you did an outstanding job of introducing me to Kayla.
09/01/21
I was so inspired by this story. This story truly shows unconditional love. I so appreciated this from beginning to end. Blessings!
I loved your story. It was a testament of our Father's love and grace and restoration. The only red ink I would offer (and only because I know it's always the red ink that really improves my own writing-painful as the colour red can sometimes be :)
The accolades are great! And motivated me though. :)
Now I've forgotten what my red ink was!
Oh yes. I agree that the first part of the story was a shade long in relation to the topic.
Hope to read many more stories from your hand.