The Official Writing Challenge
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08/09/21
I really like how you tied the topic throughout the theme of your entry.

One little red ink, in the first paragraph since there were two of them, they were shown to the table, not was shown...other than that I think you wrote a thought provoking and interesting piece.
08/10/21
Good job working in the topic.

Paragraph 11 how miscommunication and misconception. Misinformation… no clarity. Just one word or phrase can alter a meaning.

Thank you