The Official Writing Challenge
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07/10/21
True words from William Wordsworth. Thank you for taking the time to write this article; a subtle reminder that God teaches us where ever we are. Keep writing.
07/13/21
Your entry left a wonderful flavor in my Spirit!

Well done.
07/15/21
This brought a smile to my face. It is well written and has some good foundation. I would like to point out that I found it distracting to find more than the usual spacing of your entry. Also, I believe some of your punctuation should be checked. There are a lot of good tools out there for that purpose. This was a very enjoyable read! Good job!
This is a sweet devotion. I did appreciate your lesson. It's one I often need a nudge to live more like Jesus. Be careful of purple prose. Sometimes descriptions can be overdone--too fancy. Also be careful about generalizations/characteristics. Your line: Like all good Christians, I begin my day on my knees. That implies if I don't get on my knees, I'm not a good Christian. Instead just make it about you: Every morning, I get on my knees and pray. Your words did make me stop and think and that's always a win in my opinion. You have the start of an awesome devotion. With just some minor editing, it would be perfect to submit to FW daily devotions.