The Official Writing Challenge
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I enjoyed this testimony. I could easily relate to the MC and enjoyed the information about the geese. The epiphany at the end is quite profound and a reminder I needed just now.
05/28/21
This is an inspiring piece of writing. I enjoyed your information about the geese, but I really enjoyed the life lesson you learned. It also gave me a much-needed reminder. There are some things you need to look at as far as punctuation is concerned. There seems to be an extra space between paragraphs also. Other than a little punctuation fix, this is an outstanding entry.
05/30/21
This was a good article and well researched. Well done and thank you.
05/31/21
This was fabulous and inspiring.

I loved this line:
"My plan this time will be inspired by the Holy Spirit and with His help I will complete it victoriously..."


Amen!

Blessings~
06/01/21
You wrote a fascinating article. I learned something new and relearned something in a new way.

Our internal energy comes from the promised indwelling Holy Spirit.

Thank you for the reminder in your interesting and well-written piece.

I very much enjoyed it and other than a few punctuation errors, it's an excellent entry.