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Beautiful testimony. Flowed nicely and message came across clear.

I know what it is like to feel unworthy of God's love, but he certainly has a way of letting us know He loves us no matter what.
05/07/21
This was a good take on the word of the week. I personally don't believe this was your sin. You are the one who fought him off. It was definitely Steve's sin. This took courage to write and I commend you for it. There is at lest one place where you need to put a space for a new paragraph. Good work!
I agree with Laura. One of Satan's most dispicable schemes is to try to keep us in bondage for others' sins, or our own that are long since under the blood of Christ.
05/09/21
Thank you for sharing the harrowing situation past. Be proud of insisting on your no; I did, and am still proud of it.
Keep writing.
I think it was brave to tell this story. I've had a couple of experiences like that and can totally relate to the feeling of shame. It took me years to realize it wasn't my sin. Unfortunately one of mine didn't turn out the same way with him leaving. I convinced myself I must be in love to reconcile what happened. It took me a long time to get over that. I only share to make you realize how brave you really were.
Your story could use a lot of tightening. For example I might suggest you edit the first two paragraphs like this:
After being hired in an office, Steve sauntered up to me and sat at the edge of my desk. "Wanna go out Saturday?" I felt flattered that this handsome man who was two years older asked me out. I smiled as I pretended to think about it. "Where will we go?"
He wiggled his eyebrows. "How about the movies?"
Notice I cut out a lot of details that the reader really doesn't need. I also added some body language to help paint a picture. Even though this is a true story, you can add these details even if you don't remember them exactly. It's creative nonfiction. Although the age, and the fact that you were a new hire are important to you, the reader doesn't need these details. Just by tightening it like this, it leaves you way more words to add more details, body language, and dialog later on.
I'm big about not telling the reader what you're going to say, instead just jump in and show them.
You've a powerful message about forgiveness. We often forget we need to forgive ourselves sometimes too. It's easy to look back and wonder why we didn't notice certain things or why we liked someone who wasn't right. You do a great job of showing that even when others may not have thought you sinned, you might still need to forgive yourself and let those internal dialog that beat yourself up be replaced with the truth that God loves you. Keep writing, you have a great foundation.
05/13/21
I’m glad God is bringing you healing. I agree with others that the sin was Steve’s but I understand how shameful it can feel to be treated that way. As to the writing, I would not start a story with,” I want to tell you....” A better way might have been to start with: I met Steve shortly after starting to work at a new company. We worked in the same office. One day he approached me, “Hey Camille, are you free Saturday night?” That way the reader knows your name without you having to tell them directly. Keep writing, I enjoyed your story and the message.
05/20/21
I agree with the above comments. Let the reader use their own imagination to fill in unnecessary details. Start with a stronger hook and eliminate passive verbs. This story has a strong message that needs told!