The Official Writing Challenge
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03/12/21
Bravo! I LOVED this poem. My only suggestions are minor ones “can not” should be “cannot” , “anothers dreams” should be “another’s dreams”, and I’m not sure why there is a = after “not me.” But over all such a wonderful, emotive, beautiful poem! Looking forward to reading more of your work.
03/16/21
Well spoken, thank you. Keep writing.
03/16/21
Beautiful. Our common story penned in beauty.