The Official Writing Challenge
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Well written
You make some excellent points with your words. This message is always important, but particularly relevant in today's world.
04/08/21
I liked this. However, I'd start with "laying hands on the mop" as a hook to pull the reader in with, "Say what?" Then, the reader is compelled to continue to find out the message and why laying on of hands is so powerful. I would move the first line to the conclusion. Hope that helps stimulate your creative juices!