The Official Writing Challenge
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10/29/20
This is a good message, but I think you could afford to flesh it out a bit more. I was intrigued by your opening reference to standing on the shoulders of giants. It might have made your intro more gripping if you had taken a couple of sentences to remind us about one of history's great giants. But you are right. Ultimately the focus in not on us. It should be on the Saviour.
11/01/20
Interesting concept of the different viewpoints on giants.