The Official Writing Challenge
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09/13/19
This piece is on topic, and your first paragraph made me think. Keep writing.
09/13/19
Well done!
Blessings~
09/14/19
God can do the impossible!
09/14/19
Good topic. My suggestions are: Start with the second paragraph. That hooks the reader into the story. Then, develop that paragraph. Show the reader how you struggled in your head. Get the reader involved in your emotions. Then, resolve the story by showing how surrender brings true peace ... and healing!
09/14/19
You are correct It is impossible to please God without Faith. Good example.
And right on Target.
09/14/19
When I finally dropped all of my complaints and just believed He was presently healing me He did just that.

Wow! Never saw Now faith, in that way. I love it. I think you did a great job!