The Official Writing Challenge
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08/01/19
I loved the opening line, and the message was spot on. I chuckled when I read "I don't own a garage." Very engaging read.
08/01/19
Nicely done, and you certainly nailed the topic in this informative read.

I enjoyed it.

Blessings~
08/01/19
Great job with the story and transitioning to the spiritual lesson. I felt like the ending needed one more concluding sentence.
08/02/19
Interesting about the headlight cleaner. Sounds like a lot of work!