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06/06/19
You have a strong subject here. A strong subject requires a strong, well-thought out argument. Work on your hook. That's what grabs the reader's attention first. In the middle, build your argument, point by point, and tie it together with a strong conclusion. Keep writing!
I definitely love truth and the fact you chose truth as the core theme of your entry.

I do think,however, that this article brings up more questions than it answers. If you look up the word truth in the dictionary or thesaurus, you will find a whole new world of connections.

Truth,after all,must be fleshed out to be understood. Why is truth important? Truth is important because it is a light to help us through darkness. One who follows the light, will not fall. Christ is truth, the light of the world, and we cannot go wrong following Christ.

There are probably many more correlations of truth to synonyms that can 'enlighten' your essay and shed a light on its meaning.
06/08/19
This is a hard subject to tackle. I wrote something on it also. I have gotten in trouble writing on it. Ravi Zacharias said "truth is in itself exclusive". Makes perfect sense to me. Writing to Christians about it is one thing, because we have a common belief. The scriptures, talking to the world requires a deeper discernment...but we still have enemies. You did a good job!
06/09/19
You covered a lot of truth here. Plenty of questions but few answers. This would have read better had you had a good attention-grabbing opening line, and then bringing it around again at your closing. You have a good grasp on doing devotionals, just a little more work to make it exciting to read!

Thank you for sharing your thoughts. Jesus is The Truth. Blessings