The Official Writing Challenge
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05/23/19
I really like the way you have set up a ‘conversation’ between yourself and God. It clearly shows how God can overcome all obstacles. Well done
In real life, that is a tough, long road to travel down. I hope that God REALLY accomplishes that deep down in your heart. By the way, I don't think becoming a vegan will help. Good job.
05/24/19
I so understand your journey! Went through that in my 30s and it was indeed painful. I liked how you alternated with God speaking. For me, I use italics for things like that and for thoughts, for it visually helps to separate the dialoging. Well done!
05/27/19
Great take on the topic. I like how you go from your entry to God's answer. I love that about keeping a journal: God speaks to my situation through it.

I agree with Barb to set apart God's response with italics or some other formatting change.

I know from experience that this is a few year's worth of entries, or perhaps an annual entry as we revisit the old messages. But I love seeing the healing in this story.
05/27/19
Thanks for sharing some painful experiences from your life. I like your conversation with God. Good advice from others too on how to make this even more effective. Keep writing.
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