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04/26/19
Nice devotional. You could improve it by having an eye-catching opening paragraph that makes the reader want to keep reading. I like the way you mixed water rain with spiritual rain.
This is a nice devotion. I like the verse you selected. I also like the take on the topic. Raining of the Holy Spirit is a fresh take on the topic. The message is powerful and encouraging. I especially like you included a prayer at the end.
04/27/19
Sweet and powerful message.
Thank you for this wonderful devotional.
God bless~