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01/23/06
A brilliant example of how to START the world thinking in a heavenly direction. Nicely done! God bless.




















01/23/06
"Renew the face of the earth" - nice line that makes me remember how much we all need Jesus in our lives. Nice poetry.
01/23/06
What a precious gift you have...to be able to pray in poetry. This made me yearn for a fresh touch from the Holy Spirit. Kate~
01/23/06
Good message. Thank you for sharing this poem with us.
01/24/06
I like your style very much, and the words were truly inspired.
01/24/06
"hand to hand,touch by touch,
life to life" A good reminder that as Christians our one purpose is to love people. Thanks.

01/25/06
Beautiful, just beautiful.
Lovely Poem!
01/25/06
What a beautiful poem. God certainly inspired you with this to awaken in us something that we might have forgotten. Thanks for sharing this lovely poem with us.
A lot of passion. Inspiring read.
This is lovely - uplifting and refreshing, evocative too. God bless.
01/27/06
Nice! You do wonderful work!
01/27/06
Wonderful images - well done
01/28/06
You've given a wonderful visual of what the Spirit's coming at Pentecost might have been like. Loved the fire-type imagery! And the restrained alliteration. Very powerful. Yeggy