The Official Writing Challenge
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Wow. Powerful. Thank you.

God bless,

After discovering what was happening in the surprise Ending - I had to go back and re-read to appreciate the fullness of this story. Now I understand the Title, which, by the way is Brilliant! Well written!
Perfection--this is wonderful, wonderful writing.
One of the best titles, backed up with compact and powerful writing. Close to perfect, and one to learn from as well as enjoy. God bless.
Excellent...I loved how you described baptism. Nice take on the subject.:)
Hahaha! That was wonderful!! You sure got me. :-) That would make a great bulletin insert or take-home paper...