The Official Writing Challenge
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08/23/16
That was an encouraging little story. You did a good job on it.
08/25/16
Great little story - and I wonder if it is true. A couple suggestions: The first sentence "The world is not so bad after all" she said - seems to dangle in space for the reader. I wonder if it couldn't be simply left out. Also after stating you left you purse, I would add "at home" or something like that so the reader doesn't wonder where you left your purse. Nice job and on topic.