The Official Writing Challenge
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08/13/16
Nice story. I liked how it inferred a possible relationship for her with her neighbor at the end. The only thing that threw me was the "China" part. Maybe I missed something but I didn't understand why that was in there. Having said that, I did enjoy reading it.
08/16/16
I agree with Rhonda. China??