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02/05/16
I'm glad stands beside us even when we stray from His plans.

You have a good message, but watch out for run-on sentences. Also, the verb in the first sentence should be were and not was.
02/05/16
Beautiful and powerful message...thank you!

God bless~
02/06/16
Good story placed in an everyday context. A story such as this never gets old and is always encouraging for "His mercies are new every morning." (Lamentations 3:22-23)
02/09/16
This was very encouraging to me as I am one who has taken off ramps before, usually because I followed my logic instead of God's leading. You are so right about Him giving us a way to get back on track.