The Official Writing Challenge
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11/26/15
Thank you for this honest and well written entry. Well done! And, you nailed the topic right completely and then some!

God bless~
This is delightful. You grabbed me right at the end of the first paragraph. You did a nice job of showing the conflict. I found myself smiling and nodding my head as I read. A couple of tiny notes: crossword is one word and don't start a sentence with a numeral, spell it out or restructure the sentence. Speaking of one across, that was a great last line. I seriously laughed out loud.
12/03/15
M.C., Congratulations on your second place finish in the Intermediate Division. This was an honest portrayal of what can happen if you listen to the wrong influences. I got to say that rap music can grate on your nerves.
12/03/15
I forgot to mention that I loved the ending. 3 across for me is forgetful.
Congratulations, M. C. I enjoyed this personal story/essay, and can identify with it as I love harmony so much. Your ending was superb!