The Official Writing Challenge
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12/13/05
I like how you laid this story out. It flowed nicely. A few punctuation errors here and there but many good thoughts to it.
12/13/05
I've never seen an Angel Oak, at least not that I know of; I've heard of the massive Redwoods, but never have seen one. You have made me WANT to see one for myself. My favorite poem is "Trees" by Kilmore...and you have made this trip through Tree-land a delight. Well written!
12/14/05
You painted a beautiful picture with words. I bet that tree was beautiful. I could see the tree in my mind. Well done!
12/14/05
Beautifully done; I like the way that the lesson falls in the middle, and then you take us back to the Angel Oak.

I'm not sure about your choice of the word "graffiti" in the last sentence.

Very good devotional!