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Topic: Spring (as in the season) (11/28/05)
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By Derek Elkins
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Petals toughen against
Ripening with God's favor
In ever-moving vestiges,
Never-changing oracles of
God's fertile creativity
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I admit I was a little confused with the reference to petals toughening against ripening. Did you mean that they must toughen to get through winter but that there is a time (spring) when they are supposed to ripen in God's plan? Another two or three stanzas and you would have 150 words. The word vestiges made me bog down a little, trying to understand.
I think I understand that the petals (or buds) speak volumes about the creativity of our God.
One thing I noted was that the syllable count of your stanza was 6-6-7-8-8-8. I'm not extremely familiar with various poetic forms...is this a particular form?
Keep writing! You have the depth of thought of a poet!