The Official Writing Challenge
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03/12/15
I liked the way you worked this story and brought it to life. Well done and written.

God bless~
03/15/15
Well written account of a beloved Bible story. Thanks for sharing.
03/16/15
You write like a Pro! Love your descriptive style that the reader can envision everything in detail... even the emotions, I could feel and experience! A winner in my book! A very wonderful way to share the truth about having HOPE in the Lord. Good luck in the challenge, although I don't think you will be needing it!
A very well "rewritten" Bible story where we get to see just a little more.

It is filled with emotion, both sadness and joy, desperation and hope.

Stories from the heart like this one would be good to be read to children. Several areas for teaching can be drawn from it.
03/17/15
A very good re-telling of a bible story! I think you particularly shine when you describe her joy!
03/19/15
Congrats!

God bless~
Congratulations on ranking 2nd in your level and 23 overall! The highest rankings can be found on the message boards. Happy Dance!