The Official Writing Challenge
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09/05/14
You've crafted a masterful story that pulled me in and made me cry at the end.

You've shown the reader the MC's anguish as she did a "life review" through internal dialogue. And, this held such a note of authenticity.

I've worked my entire career in the nursing home industry, I love the elderly, and they often do life reviews and reflect, especially upon a major move. You've brought that to life fully, front and center!

Excellent work...I loved this poignant emotional touching and realistic tale.

God bless~
09/09/14
This is a very beautiful and touching article allowing the reader to see the emotions of one who now has to give up what she held dear as far as she could remember. This was well written and gives the reader pause to think about the future.
09/10/14
Wow! This is wonderful writing. The story telling, the descriptive details and the message all make this a contender in my book.

Thanks and well done.
09/11/14
Congrats! Lovely story.