The Official Writing Challenge
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I like the easy reading flow of this well written story. Outstanding.
07/21/14
Beautiful job! WOnderful insight and analogies combine to make this an oustanding entry.

God bless~
I love your message and have often said God can do wonderful things in the midst of tragedy if we allow him. The only thing I'd suggest would be to leave out the opening paragraph and jump right into the story. The reader would figure out quickly what you were doing. You could even put your message in Job's words with something lik: My wife assaulted me. "Why are you so calm?"
"My dear,there is a hidden blessing within each tear drop – it should not fall in vain without teaching me its purpose."
Or something similar. I like the way you did it, but the beginning slowed me down just a tad. You did a marvelous job of the retelling of this story. You have a lot of talent.
Nicely written.

Accepting what God allows in a person's life points to the person's closeness to God.

I like your thoughts and the source of your conclusions.