The Official Writing Challenge
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05/22/14
I love this!

God bless~
05/27/14
*smile* I can just hear a young child saying, "O wow!"

I think this would be stronger if you elaborated one at least one "wow" incident.

(and I don't think God will mind a heart-felt "O wow!" in heaven)
This is a lovely devotion. If you added a Bible verse and maybe a prayer, I think you could submit it to the FW devotions. I like how you start out with a true story that everyone can relate to. I suspect in heaven we will hear choruses singing Oh Wow! Nice job