The Official Writing Challenge
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02/14/14
Wow - so true! This touched my heart, excellent wrap up!

God bless~
Great message.
Challenge yourself to come up with fresh and unique words.
This evoked all kinds of emotions in me. You did a fine job of tapping into the heart of many people. Some may have had a hard time seeing the topic, but I did get where you where going and I like that you stepped outside of the box to talk about the real dead end. Your last verse is quite powerful because dying without truly knowing God is a horrific dead end, You really moved me with your words. Nicely done. :-)