The Official Writing Challenge
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I liked that fact that you came full circle with your observations. A few punctuation errors to clear up, but this is a great piece--something for everyone to relate to.
Reminds me of my first semester away at university... going from nice and warm to freezing cold. As was already said, a few punctuation errors, but otherwise a solid piece. I definitely liked how you came full circle. :)
A bit of humor never hurt anybody; and I needed something out of the "ho-hum" category to perk me up. This was interesting, and gave me a smile. Thanks for sharing. Nicely written, I might add.
Obviously, it wasn't obviously obvious. (LOL)
Maybe on the outside..
Oh well, enjoyed your story. God bless ya, littlelight