The Official Writing Challenge
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11/08/05
Very cool depiction of this Bible story. I love your description of the jail cell - creepily realistic! Great job, and great story to use for this topic!
11/08/05
Realistic and moving descriptions make this story come to life. Good job!
11/09/05
Excellent writing.
11/09/05
Thank you for the tangible descriptions. I especially liked the tie-in between the psalms they sang and the pending event. Seemed to end abruptly--wish you'd had another 100 words or so!
Yes indeed very well done - in reading these Scriptures together
and forming scenes of reality you breathe new life into those wondrous words.
11/10/05
Ohhhh for a few more words! That retched word count! Wow! So true and so powerful. And I'd say a work of art with words. And Wow again!
11/10/05
Very nicely done! I loved the way the songs affected the jailor!
Wow, wow, wow. A precise interpretation of that night in the jail. Thanks for sharing!
Well done! I especially liked the sentence about the rats and unshod feet...very creepy and realistic...set the tone well! A very interesting and beautifully described retelling.
Oh this is excellent - provocative, evocative and such craft in the words. This drew me in and held me captivated; a powerful testamont to faith. Excellent. God bless.
11/10/05
Ooh, what can I say?! A work of art in words again ... not a pretty work of art by any means, but powerful!
11/10/05
Wow..great writing!
11/11/05
Wonderful telling of the story! Great writing. I enjoyed this!
Powerful writing. You raise your own standard each time you submit. What can I say but "Well Done"!
11/12/05
Well done Karen. Love your description of the jail – yuck, I really hate rats - and the realistic way you portrayed the thoughts philosophy of POV character. Great juxtaposition of the two passages. Yeggy
11/15/05
CONGRATULATIONS on getting 'highly commended!' It is well deserved.
11/15/05
You see within every story that God gives us and you elaborate beautifully.
I've said it before and I'll say it again, you have a gift Karen. E.
A tremendous gift!
Congratulations on your "Highly Recommended" recognition! Very good job! :-)