The Official Writing Challenge
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This is an interesting and well-written essay. You mentioned a few things that I hadn't heard of before. Make sure though, if you quote someone that you include the information in a footnote (An author's note doesn't add to the word count. I have never heard of Dennis Prager. You may want to cite the works from which you are quoting and tell the reader who the person is. You did a nice job of covering the topic in an educational and different way. Nice job.
Because of your presentation, this factual piece came off almost poetic. Well done
Interesting piece. Nicely done. Thanks. God bless~