The Official Writing Challenge
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Lovely story. I like how Billy, doubting Thomas, was able to prove that his grandfather was in fact a hero just as he said.
Great story, well done, and well told. I really enjoyed it. Good job.

God Bless~
I really enjoyed this. At first, I was a tad skeptical too just like little Billy. It just seemed to well-written for real life. However you did pull me in and reminded me of my daughter's experience on the swim team. We joked that she worked hard to come into last place. When the story took the twist, a huge grin spread over my face. I totally didn't expect that and am always thrilled when a twist surprises me. You did a fine job with this piece.
Congratulations on your ribbon and for ranking 11th overall!