The Official Writing Challenge
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Isn't it strange how we always want to do things our own way without listening to the advice of those who could help us.
This is really fascinating. I enjoyed the characters and the conflict that rages inside Jordan is a nice take on the topic. I did have spots where it was hard to know who was talking. If the same person is speaking there are no end quotes at the end of the paragraph but just at the beginning of the next. I think you did a nice job of showing a mother's love for her son. I enjoyed this, it was a pleasant read.
This was some story! It held so many messages on so many different levels. Nicely done. Thanks.
God bless~