The Official Writing Challenge
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05/12/11
I like the way you use "outgoing" as a synonym for passing from this life into the next. That's something we can all achieve, whether we are outgoing in this life or not.
05/14/11
happy, sad, touching, engaging and good use of the topic.should do well and i love it!
I loved your story and the Title was Perfect. I love to think of all the Saints at that homecoming. Your story was well written and elogently told. Keep writing.