The Official Writing Challenge
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09/19/05
Funny stories I'm sure you'll always remember! Thanks for sharing! You need to work on your punctuation some. For instance, a period will always be inside a quotation mark. Also, you need to use commas for sentences which contain two independent clauses joined together by a conjunction.
09/20/05
Nice job of storytelling; you have a gift for narrative. I agree with the previous comment--also, you should put speaces between each paragraph.