The Official Writing Challenge
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Although at times I had a hard time following it, I can tell You have a strong faith in the Lord and want to share His love with your whimsical poem. The message of His love is quite clear.
Sounds like you like to ride a motorbike or motorcycle better than a car because of the view and smells outside. Nicely written poem, could almost be a rap song? I had trouble getting the point of your song but sense you witnessed to others in your neighborhood while on your ride, with Jesus on your side. Would like to read more of your works. You have great talent. Blessings. :)