The Official Writing Challenge
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Would be interesting with more specifics, if you know them, e.g. "the opulant registration desk was once the location of on the spot surgery"
There is much good to be said about this lovely analogy. Try to be more aware of apostrophe usage and word choice: it's/its then/than gurney's/gurneys alot/ a lot. These little things sometimes make the difference between a fair piece and a really good one.
Good analogies!
Brenda, I was judging for the hotel/motel challenge, and I really thought this entry had potential. I found it very interesting to read, and also loved the message. It just needs a little bit of editing and "tweaking" to make it very good. Be encouraged though - I enjoyed your article very much. With love, Deb (Challenge Coordinator)