The Official Writing Challenge
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As your last sentence states: The things which God has prepared for those who love Him, boggles my mind and yet fills me with excitement. I know that I can't even imagine the depth of peace and fulfillment that awaits his children. Awesome to think about!
This is a nice paced poem that brought a smile to my face. I loved the scripture you put at the end. How true that verse is.
We still imagine and wonder and marvel,Ahh he wants us to be as little children. Great little poem,awesome truth. Ruth
Great little poem and filled with such truth. I enjoyed this immensely. Good job and keep writing.
I love the beat of this article. You did a very nice job of playing the words. It had alot of truth and a little humor, and much of my attention. Good job.
A fun read with something to think about.
Very enjoyable presentation of your message.