The Official Writing Challenge
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Very good. No truer words were ever spoken. Wise writers learn from critiques from others.
I truly enjoyed your poem. You've written it in a gentle, kindred, like-hearted way. I identified myself in the thoughts you've written.

Thank you for the good challenge! I will move on, and "be of good cheer!"
Interesting. I liked your last line the best because it's something I've learned myself.
You deserve the first-three place award, AnneRene! The Lord rewarded your diligence. Good job! I'm rejoicing with you, jumping on my seat, praising the Lord with you! God bless you, fellow writer! See yah soon up there too, Lord willing. :):):)
Congratulations, Holly, on this win! Great job!
Yay! and up to level 3 you go, congrats! ^_^
Congratulations on your win for this fun and uplifting piece!
congratulations on the win! I love the way the rhyme flowed, the rhythm is different. Great!