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Topic: The Critique/Review (for writers) (05/06/10)
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TITLE: Leave Your Bellyaching Blues Behind | Previous Challenge Entry
By AnneRene' Capp
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Inside of each writer
No matter your gender
Please strive to stay tender
Be it Lady or Lad
Don’t ever be sad
Remember your couth
And let joy be your truth
Stand by rejections
Make no exceptions
For always they come
Now be a good chum
Take each review
Don’t ever be blue
But in your great stride
Remember your pride
Lift up your chin
Remember you’ll win
So never, give up
Reward is your cup
Creative and deep
At times, we do weep
Yes, it is so, we all get depressed
And yet I still know, we also get blessed
I beg from the heart
To do your small part
Discard your vast sulk
And remove all your bulk
Lighten your load
And change your mode
But if you must wine
You’ll always be blind
Grief and duress
Unhealthy distress
They take a great toll
And hinder the sole
So why are you down and ever so bleak?
You’ll grow and you’ll learn from each ones critique
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Thank you for the good challenge! I will move on, and "be of good cheer!"