The Official Writing Challenge
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This is a very creative piece. I enjoyed it and almost could walk in your shoes as you described it.
Good job.
I love those kind of eek and awe moments.God indeed tells us to have faith and then just watch out when we do. Thanks for reminding us of those moments.
Very creative use of the topic word for the week.

I found all of the parenthetical interruptions to the text a bit distracting; perhaps you could have listed them at the end (or, since you didn't quote actual verses, they could have been left out altogether). And I'd have loved to read more of your experiences in South America, to really feel your fear there.

The lesson at the end was spot on.
I loved this just the way you wrote it. I am used to reading devotionals and the scripture references are nice to read to emphasize what you are sharing. Great message.
You make such a good point. i never quite thought about it like that, but it is so true. good job.