The Official Writing Challenge
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Gripping story about a man that was a doer of God's word! Good writing!
Your story is filled with love and compassion for others through sacrifice. Good Job!
I wonder was this from an old folktale? Either way it is very well written and has a classic feel to it. Love the visual picture you created of henrys appearance.
Good story. A few typos but the content was interesting. Thanks.
I loved this story. It pulled me in and I had to find out what happened to Henry. Thank you for sharing such an interesting story and yes there is no greater gift then sacrificing ones life for another.
Good story line, well-written. Wonderful setting, but it might benefit for a light trimming of some of the adjectives.

Still, great storytelling.
Oh, I like this a lot. You catptyred the story well, and had me wondering what was going to happen next. Great job.
So yellow also expresses bravery and sacrifice - no cowardice here. Congratulations on the depth and brevity of your entry, and on your placing.