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A beautiful contrast between intense - and temporary -infatuation, and the love of Jesus that will last forever. Well done
The beginning is funny and its strange how some childhood moments can stay with us forever. You made this believable.
Thank you for such a gripping story. Things that happen in childhood can leave scars and fears but Christ overcame the world and reclaimed the keys from our tormentor.
I enjoyed the opening and agree children can be cruel; it can be hard to get beyond it. You did a great job of turning that to a story of devotion, and forgiveness. Thanks for sharing.