The Official Writing Challenge
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This is lovely. Thank-you.
10/08/09
Wow. Very powerful. You captivated and pulled me into the story. Wonderful story-telling here. I felt the urgency and the releif. Very very good.
10/10/09
This would be a good discussion-starter in a youth group. Well done.
10/12/09
Great story. It drew me in, and I'm glad for the uplifting ending. I think you meant "scarred wrists" rather than "scared wrists," though, but that's only a minor issue.