The Official Writing Challenge
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What an amazing and uplifting story. God is so good to us and if you pray in the Spirit and believe in your heart then we have the power of Christ to move mountains. This is truly a tribute to God's love.
I really can relate to this. There has been many times in my life where the touch of His hand seemed to stop time . . . and in this case contraction. Oh, how I love the warm tender touch of our Savior. Thank You for sharing this. Debby
This is an uplifting story. There were a few minor tense changes that gave my eyes a jolt, but the story flowed nicely and conveyed an important lesson about faith.
Ooops! I just wanted to add that the first paragraph has awesome detail and atmosphere. Really set the stage for me!