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08/20/09
This is well-written, with excellent organization and flow.

I found it difficult to read, though (perhaps that was your intent) because of the graphic description. And I'm not sure how the topic for the week (Winter) ties in.

This definitely follows the pattern for a good devotional: a hook, an illustration, a lesson. Well done.
This was a terrific piece and touched my heart. Well done!
08/20/09
The comparison of the two wounds was very effective.
Lots of meaning here.
I guess you were trying to show how one living in the world portrays the coldness of life filled with open wounds of dispair. This was a very gripping piece. And finally turning to Jesus was the frosting on the cake.