The Official Writing Challenge
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Wow, I did not see the God connection coming. That was awesome! I started to hear the song, "As the deer panteth for the water so my soul longeth after Thee" in my head. One small typo--you were stopped in your tacks instead of tRacks but I knew what you meant.
This is so true....great analogy. Thank you.
Very nice. I also noticed the "tacks" error...but I'm the master of such mistakes, so I fully understand.

Good descriptions and scenery.

May God bless and continue to inspire you write such good things.

Dan Blankenship